Hi Devin, overall, it's going well and the strip is quite clear. To enhance the point of the gag, it would be helpful to see the earphones in panel 1 (so I would push the hair behind the right ear to reveal the earphone in the ear). In the last panel, you could make it even funnier if the iPod was pulling a little further (not "down" so much as forward). Watch the tangent in panel 2 (the hair near the top edge of the frame). All the drawings are very helpful for your final pen tool work! Goodl!
Hi Devin, overall, it's going well and the strip is quite clear. To enhance the point of the gag, it would be helpful to see the earphones in panel 1 (so I would push the hair behind the right ear to reveal the earphone in the ear). In the last panel, you could make it even funnier if the iPod was pulling a little further (not "down" so much as forward). Watch the tangent in panel 2 (the hair near the top edge of the frame). All the drawings are very helpful for your final pen tool work! Goodl!
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